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Not all scars show,
Not all wounds heal.
Sometimes you can't see
The pain that others feel.

You ripped a hole in my chest.
You cut me with the already jagged edges of my heart.
And when you left, you forgot to sew me back up.
You left me torn apart.

Not all scars show,
Not all wounds heal.
Sometimes you can't see
The pain that others feel.

If I could run right now,
My only goal would be to get as far away from
You as I possibly can.
I rembember the time you kissed me.
I remember the times you held my hand.

Not all scars show,
Not all wounds heal.
Sometimes you can't see
The pain that others feel.

I've tried to move on,
But I don't think it's possible.
I hate the way you look at me
Like you want me back.
Like you can't see

That not all scars show,
Not all wounds heal.
Sometimes you can't see
The pain that others feel.
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I loved this song, up to the last verse. the last verse kind of lost me. I experienced something very similar to the other verses, I guess I just never experienced something like the last verse is taking about.

Anyway, I loved it. I got it. Up to the last verse... Good job!
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~katrinamar13 May 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you...this is really old, now that I'm more experienced I could probably right a better version of it, but I like to keep things the way they were when I first wrote them.
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That's very understandable. I don't like to re-write my work once it's been finished either.
You left a link to this poem in the comments under a friend's poem, that's how I found you :P

Keep up the good work. "Writers are artists too!"
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~katrinamar13 May 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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:iconbemari:
Well written song!
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~katrinamar13 May 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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:iconchillyrilly:
this is really good!
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~katrinamar13 Feb 13, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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~dezzi5643 Jan 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
i like this and it's so true!!!
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